My dream destination aint no promise land/
a promise just a fools comfort/
i want a place that i can feel comfort/
and all di *****s not sayin "Bun dat"/
a place where i dont have to leave em like a lit match/
and bun dat aint bad/
its just the way we use it/
ppl 2day took that phrase and they str8 abused it/
they always use it on the wrong things/
i want a place where everybodies one/
sistas, brothas, queens and kings/
a place where i dont have to grill or sizzle/
and *****s off di bullshit not sayin for shizzle ma nizzle/
a place where i can take the time to build a family/
and freedom aint no longer a word its di damn reality/
a place that wisdom is the key to enter/
and reading went from fundamental to an ideal adventure/

and no GAYS is ever seen in it/
a place where i dont have to get high, im already feelin it/
a place where a man is a man and the children are cherished/
a place where politricks and slavery has perished

it goes on but i'll leave it their
i did this wen i was aspiring to be common sense in 9th grade.

My dream destination aint no promise land/
a promise just a fools comfort/
i want a place that i can feel comfort/
and all di *****s not sayin "Bun dat"/
a place where i dont have to leave em like a lit match/
and bun dat aint bad/
its just the way we use it/
ppl 2day took that phrase and they str8 abused it/
they always use it on the wrong things/
i want a place where everybodies one/
sistas, brothas, queens and kings/
a place where i dont have to grill or sizzle/
and *****s off di bullshit not sayin for shizzle ma nizzle/
a place where i can take the time to build a family/
and freedom aint no longer a word its di damn reality/
a place that wisdom is the key to enter/
and reading went from fundamental to an ideal adventure/

and no GAYS is ever seen in it/
a place where i dont have to get high, im already feelin it/
a place where a man is a man and the children are cherished/
a place where politricks and slavery has perished

it goes on but i'll leave it their
i did this wen i was aspiring to be common sense in 9th grade.

ez dog. just because you can see to the top of the abyss they wanna think your mind aint deep.. they dont know you..

well done yute.

yeah this mad!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! props yute

Nice play on words, but to joke around a bit -

and [b]freedom[b] aint no longer a word its di damn reality/


FREEDOM is very real - our webmaster and mod. LOL.

Unfortunately we cannot change due to the mentality and society that we have been in-bred into. That aside, nice play on words. Keep it up.

PeAcE.