we're all but season different in our durations. new friendships spring forth similarities notices friendship grows
The friendship grows steamy and passionate as the summer progresses
Feelings regress as the winter ensues to chill hearts on fire
Frienship that has reached a new level have fall, fallen to lower levels and are nothing more than strangers at heart, formal on the same level of interaction as everybody else. nothing is special nothing is unique.
The seasons have elapsed.

kool i like how you encorporated the seasons...very creative

pretty good, i like it. I write poems too. Already posted two, so go ahead and look them through.

I think you used fall...one to many times other than that its nice

lovely transistions.

PeAcE.

wow. thats deep man...i like it...


zomg guess what..ur poem rawks!!!!!














Woot. post number 20

its ok, its not ur best work but its ok. using the 4 seasons was nice

That pretty good. I like it. I write poems as well I think I'll put one up.