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what is this that's plain to see
standing here in front of me
words alone cannot describe
what it is i feel inside
locked away inside my heart
something i've had from the start
a love so strong it can't be wrong
a moving story all along
what is it i see in me
a love that's waiting to be free


Seasons of Me and You

It's a long road the path of life
Pain, sorrow, the facts of life
People will come, people will go
Just as the winter, just as the snow
What in life remains the same
Is that seasons will change
Hearts will be broken
Expressive words of love won't be spoken
And people will remain lonely and distant.

Can we see what goes on in each others mind
If we do what will we find and will we like what we find
Because people like seasons can sometimes change too
But some people who are special
Like me and you, never change, we never do
And until that day we meet again
I will never forget you, my friend
And the seasons that we have been through.

Good...good...seems you accomplish expressing what you were trying to express great transition...and decent flow.

thanks... i really just write songs nowadays
www.myspace.com/joelchang is ma artist page
i have a hilarious wow video on youtube of ma character a dutty wine
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aSejZzevOSM

Wtf where you singing into...man you need some studio time...lmao

i was singing into a very pop down mic... i never sound nuttin like dat when i was recording it lol

haha.. tough yute. you got some talent.. nice poems like the second one.

Pretty decent poems...i like em...but excuse me super star Joel Chang i love that break up song...you got some talent man keep up the fine work *wink wink* ^_^

Here is a song i've been working on.

How I Feel

A slave i'm no longer to hurting and pain
Its all over now i'm done with this game
A change thats so drastic I altered my name
Relieving the pressure no longer insane
And now i'm much stronger than ever before
I'm closing the chapter i'm locking that door
Destroying the sickness that plagued me inside
Its time to let go I no longer hide

How I feel without you
How I breathe without you
How i'm me without you
How I live without you

A slave i'm no longer to you my dear friend
Im so glad that its over this is the end
Purging my feelings so my heart can mend
Relieving the sadness best wishes i send
And now i'm much wiser than ever before
I'm closing the chapter destroying that door
Destroying the sickness that plagued me inside
Its time to let go I no longer hide

How I feel without you
How I breathe without you
How i'm me without you
How I live without you

A slave im no longer to feeling this way
I'm so glad that its over its time to pray
That i'll become wiser with each passing day
The joy that i'm feeling is here to stay
Replaced you erased you girl from my mind
The darkness is lifting is this a sign
The sickness that plagued me no longers inside
My hearts filled with gladness i no longer hide

How I feel without you
How I breathe without you
How i'm me without you
How I live without you

Anyone here makes riddims? I'd love to sing this one and put it on my myspace

I know someone that does, but he's in high school. Will check still. Lovely work.

PeAcE.

the song that i put up on my myspace i went to the studio with it. it sounds a million times better. www.myspace.com/joelchang

u got mad skills dude
keep it up