View Full Version : Until.... by L. Bizzle


Liquid Bunny
10-24-2005, 01:40 AM
Now i am not one to do this poem poem bizniz but! one day i guess i was a bit down.. and i got tired of talking to ma self so i wrote a poem... let hi are shares it wit u guys.

lol it kinda lame still now that i re read it ... but i just showing u guys that Tuggs can write poems too...lol

Until
by L. Bizzle foh shizzle

The silence,
Eyes slowly close,
Surroundings fade,
Emotions of dark and despair,
Thoughts running wild,
And as sharp as daggers each time,
They pierce the soul,
Thoughts of what could, have should, have and will,
Thoughts of what was, is, and shan’t any more.

Closed eyes haunted by faces,
Loose thoughts plagued by memories,
And a still heart,
One that wants more to life than momentary happiness,
A heart that yearns more from life,
One that craves for belonging and love,
Sinking deep and deeper into...
A loud noise!
Eyes wide open,
Awakened...
The silence replaced by sounds,
Surroundings reappear,
Thoughts collected,
And "life" goes on....
Until the silence.

death_knight
10-24-2005, 02:00 AM
Nice.. no Really Really Nice. <mos def voice> Thank everybody for coming out tonight</mos def voice>

Virus
10-24-2005, 10:00 PM
WOW, that touched my soul http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v11/RSOneLight/emoticons/ffaint.gif

Malloc-X
10-24-2005, 10:15 PM
everybody is a poet now

Liquid Bunny
10-25-2005, 12:07 AM
everybody is a poet now
LOL shut up
U just jealous caz i'm stealing ur shine... u too bad min'

Skillachi
10-26-2005, 11:20 AM
I would never believe that Bunny wrote that. I had to check it over like3 times to make sure its da bunny. Good One bunny you get an award from me.

Malloc-X
10-26-2005, 02:28 PM
maybe i shouuld actually read it then

Warchief
10-26-2005, 03:18 PM
ahhh that poem sucks man ! !

Liquid Bunny
10-27-2005, 11:32 AM
ahhh that poem sucks man ! !
DWL... thanks Warchief.. a honest opinion....

Blindz
10-27-2005, 12:50 PM
I don't get it :dunno, what, were u sleeping and enjoying the silence then awoke, what, or where u day-dreaming.... u were in a class or something like that wen u wrote this don't

Malloc-X
10-27-2005, 02:46 PM
or maybe she was drinkin while high

Warchief
10-27-2005, 06:32 PM
DWL... thanks Warchief.. a honest opinion....


i was joking you here bunny ! ! i just wanted to see how you would have responded.....being that your a moderator i though i was gonna get suspended for a while from the forums

Malloc-X
10-27-2005, 06:52 PM
i was joking you here bunny ! ! i just wanted to see how you would have responded.....being that your a moderator i though i was gonna get suspended for a while from the forums

u still have the bloodlust in u, u dont treat women like u treat Death_knight huntresses

Warchief
10-27-2005, 07:21 PM
you right you nuh malloc but guess what? its not on autocast;)

Malloc-X
10-29-2005, 09:58 AM
its a good poem i just like givin trouble, chaos and conflict are my parents

BLQ
12-18-2006, 12:19 AM
Nice.. no Really Really Nice. <mos def voice> Thank everybody for coming out tonight</mos def voice>

LOL@ mos def voice............yea i was nice

khat17
12-31-2006, 06:32 AM
It's not bad Bunny. People need to read into poetry, it's not always literal. Really, what I've gathered is that through the things in life that touch us the most, society is still not affected by them. Therefore, even though love, family, and friends affect us directly, work and commuting and things like making a living will not wait on us. Lovely. Keep at it. If you're not a talkative person, or you have nobody to talk to, write it. Personally, I think I'm better at writing than speaking, so I don't speak much unless gaming or discussing anime.

PeAcE.