View Full Version : I kill myslef A Million Times and over.


BLQ
02-13-2008, 02:51 AM
How could I act in such a suicidal way;
Put the gun to my face and pull the trigger away;
My blood spill and hit the concrete,
and flowed like a river;
I die, but I lie to kill myslef again

death_knight
02-13-2008, 09:20 AM
short to the point. it gets its point accross sucessfully. not bad.

Malloc-X
02-13-2008, 09:40 AM
u need psychiatrict help, just kidding. its ok

henderson
02-14-2008, 10:03 AM
quite interesting..but shouldn't that last line be:
I die, but i live to kill myself again

GRim
11-12-2008, 11:02 PM
now.

he (lay)s on the ground. Still capable, of.. "dying" again.

poetic.