How could I act in such a suicidal way;
Put the gun to my face and pull the trigger away;
My blood spill and hit the concrete,
and flowed like a river;
I die, but I lie to kill myslef again

short to the point. it gets its point accross sucessfully. not bad.

u need psychiatrict help, just kidding. its ok

quite interesting..but shouldn't that last line be:
I die, but i live to kill myself again

now.

he (lay)s on the ground. Still capable, of.. "dying" again.

poetic.