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jtech
07-22-2006, 12:59 AM
Born in a world of rationality
In a dark state
Feeling things other than gravity
Nausea is cause by the weight

Born and left alone
I watched everyone turn their back
I’m aching but to weak to moan
As I sit in my shack

Gazing upon the falling rain
I know how it must feel
A knowing it will fall in pain
As it bursts against the ground but tries to conceal

I’ve been learning far across this land
I treat every man as if they wer a brother
As my life sinks like quick sand
I question “why was I abandoned by my mother?”

death_knight
07-22-2006, 01:51 AM
not bad jtech.. i love the first stanza

emux
07-22-2006, 08:16 PM
HMMM!:eusa_thin

jtech
07-23-2006, 05:22 PM
I have a broad and guilty past
I make a sin everywhere I turn
I kept saying “this was my last”
But I’ll always feel that burn

Nothing could ever change what I’ve done
I wish I could repent
I can’t believe I used to think it was fun
Why didn’t I stop at the extent?

My life is lost
And it can’t be saved
It has stopped cold like frost
For my self the end is paved

khat17
08-18-2007, 04:16 PM
you keep the rythm nicely. Are these new or some you had before?

PeAcE.