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Old 02-17-2006, 11:23 PM
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The swirling vortex behind otaku began to close and what stood towering over him was a beast that could only be described as terror itself, what stood now was a minotaur looking creature, the head of bull and the body of an oversized man, its eyes burned with flames and glowing tattoos engulfed its blackened body, its horns where as long as his snout, the tip of which were searing red, chains of flame lingered off its wrists, his weapons of destruction where Runed iron knuckles which covered the bottom half of his fingers.

Otaku took a deep breath,
"Cheiftain, do you see what stands before you, this your enemy, send him into oblivion".

Chieftain snorts and steam shoots forward from his nose and smashes his knuckles together, a deafning sound wave echoes through out whats left of the cave, as he pulls his fists a part a dark red lightning energy dances furiously between the runes incribed on the iron knuckles, his muscles bulge and pulsate as if he is trying to pull the world apart, he cries out and roars, the flames in his eyes go sporadically out of control, the ground begins to tremor.

"what the hell is this....unnerveing power i am feeling", shudders unaz.

then finally, the power that were binding his fists together released its bond to the other and enourmous power surged through chieftain's body from both his arms to his legs to his chest where it collided and a loud explosion followed.

"do you see now, this is the true strength of chieftain, kneel before it in defeat", boasts otaku

"Never!!!!", screams out unaz

He forms some seals, and enchants his claws with the destructive power of lightning, he lunges after otaku dragging his claws of lighitning in the cold earth..
chieftain steps forward and lifts his lumbering arm forward and grabs unaz's claws,
and lifts up unaz with the crackling lightning beside his face and chieftain says in a deep commanding voice that echoes throughtout the cave...

"That will not work....mortal"

chieftain lets go off unaz but before he can touch the ground, chieftains other hand comes from below and stops right in front of unaz's chest, a massive shockwave ensues that ripple and tear at the foundation of the cave, even gabriel and janus has to take notice off this awesome display of power and assume defensive positions, the shockwave contiunes to ripple walls of the cave, unaz is motionless in the air in the distortion of matter, chieftain then forcefully pulls his hand back, causeing a massive a vortex which rips at the very fabric of time and space thereby causing the space around chieftain to appear as if it has slowed down, then a massive sucking sound follows, chieftain then forcefully stops his fist and then it happens, the vortex explodes and the moutain side is no more, nor was unaz only the vestiges of the sanctum of empathy stood firm...chieftain look behind him, janus, gabriel and even otaku stood in astonishment.

Otaku takes in unaz's lingering soul.

"well...uh....dude.....there you have it" snickered otaku

"i suggest we continue this battle outside", said Gabriel

Janus dashes outside and begins to muster all the energy he possibly can,
"no holding back from here on out, unaz was caught off guard but i will not be so unfortunate",

Dark purple energy began to lash out.

"well arent you all just a bunch of crayons, is there a sky blue too?" jokes otaku,
you people are beginning to bore me, your destruction is imminent...

"how long can you control that thing otaku, you may seem cool and composed but i can sense that your being torn from the inside to bond that thing to this realm, all i have to do is get to you and tear you apart", said janus

"hm, well i'd like to see you try", smirks otaku.

Janus forms the seals and cries out..
"Dark Dragon aura!!!"

His body becomes engulfed in dark purple flames....he disappears, otaku is unable to move due to his concentration on chieftain but no matter, chieftain spins around with his massive hand outstrecthed, the ground beneath it ripples as it moves above it, otaku kneels as the hand goes right over his head, Janus appears and his face stops centimetres away from cheiftains hand he disappears again before chieftain can close his hand on his skull, Janus backs off and lunges out his power toward otaku, cheiftain nudges his fist towards it, the air rips apart and the power dissipates, Janus begins to move frantcially around the area, chieftains eyes stay ever fixed on his location..

"i see your getting desperate,hm, all you have to do is hit m...ugh...ah..oh crap", otaku falls to his knees,
"i cant hold.....it...any longer.....ughhh..."

Fiery chains from out of nowhere shoots out from the skys and links with the chains already hanging from cheiftains arms, they outstrecth his arms backwards, he struggles to break free but it is futile, the hole from whence he came begins to manifest above him, slowly he is being pulled back to his prison...

Janus lets out an enourmous sigh of relief.

"Gabriel...its your turn...im just gonna rest here for awhile....."
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Old 02-22-2006, 06:26 PM
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Realizing his opportunity to destroy Otaku, Janus becomes engulfed in purple flames and once again disappears. Appearing over the unconscious otaku he shouts out "Dark Dragon Fangs!" As he continues his attack his sword is engulfed into a purple flame before quickly changing shape into a long yellow katana with ridged edges. But before Janus can finish his attack, a bright white flash clashes against his sword changing the direction, pushing him off balance. Quickly he attacked the direction where the white light was coming from, but looked up and saw nothing.

"Mr. Rainbow man, why would you want to kill an unconsious person, there is no honour in doing such a thing" Janus heard but couldnt pick up exactly where it was coming from. It seemed to come from everywhere. Janus tried to calm himself and focus on where the voice was coming from but then the voice boomed again.

"Hear is something that is a more honourable kill--" As soon as that sentence finished a large white tiger appeared out of the darkness and rushed with snapping teeth at Janus. Janus side stepped the first attack and made a upward swing with his sword only to see the tiger block his sword with his paws before biting his neck. As quickly as the pain of the bite struck him, it disappeared along with the tiger. He felt his neck for blood but there was no piercing anywhere, Gabriel appeared behind him.

"That was a bit more challenging wasnt it Janus" Gabriel said. With a yellow glow Janus quickly swung his sword around to cut Gabriel but there was no one there.

"Stop playing games with me old man! Are you afraid to come out and fight me?" Janus said, after which Gabriel appeared beside him and said "Its not that im afraid to fight you, I am afraid you just aren't powerful enough to stand up to me, I am giving you the opportunity to run away before it is too late."

Janus laughed and disappeared into the purple flames again. The flames re-appeared and as soon as they did the yellow sword struck out cutting Gabriel cleanly across his chest. Surely he had destroyed him now Janus thought, but as soon as he did the figure in front of him faded away. Gabriel who now stood in front of him about 20 feet away shook his head saying. "Janus, realize your defeat and leave while you still have the chance, I do not want to kill you--" Janus Disappeared into the purple flames again but this time as the flames reappeared behind Gabriel, Janus fell to his knees with slices all around his chest and back.

"Do you realize your defeat or would you like me to take this a step further" Gabriel Said as a gust of wind picked up around him.

"I will never lose to an old man like you" Janus said as he got up forming seals.

At the sight of this Gabriel calmly said "White Phoenix's tail feather." The sword changed to a thin glowing white blade, setting light to the dark cave, the handle of the sword was Golden and shone just as magnificently.

Janus was now engulfed not in purple but black flames, he shouted "Dark Dragon Bla--" Janus was cut off. Gabriel was now behind him. His sword back in its sheathe, he went to pick up Otaku, as he did this, Janus fell to his knee's, blood gushing from his mouth. He reached to stop the blood but his hands fell to the ground his sword in it. His eyes opened wide, how could he have been defeated so effortlessly. Gabriel took up Otaku and placed him on his shoulders, and continued to walk through the cave, Janus felt his chest tear open and he fell to the ground, as soon as this happened Hellscream began to act on its own and flew out of the Unconscious Otaku's hand and stabbed Janus taking away his soul.
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Old 02-26-2006, 04:19 PM
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Gabriel rested Jon/Otaku on a platform within the Path of Empathy. As Otaku's body began to firstly smoke then be set ablaze Gabriel started forming protective seals. As he rapidly did hand motions he began chanting "Banish this evil and reveal the light. Banish this evil and reveal the light."

As the purifying fires abated Jon's skin could finally be seen. Jon lay unconscious on the platform surrounded by an ancient protective ring. Gabriel softly whispered, "Awaken". Jon rose with a start.

"What happened- where am I?" Jon asked. He was so confused that his words were sputtering out almost senselessly. "Just a minute ago I was trapped... Wha.. How did I... That monster- it was going to eat my soul...Where."

"You are safe now. I have taken you into the Path of Empathy." Gabriel answered comfortingly.

"But Otaku is still within me, I can feel like he is asleep but he is still at my core." Jon replied more sensibly. He was beginning to regain control of his emotions.

"True, and I promise you before you leave this place only one of you will inhabit your body. This is the final stage in the process of your purification." Gabriel answered at first reassuringly and then firmly near the end.

"Well that is comforti..." Jon began. "But wait, you mean there is a chance that I can lose my body?"

"There is always a chance. However, I need to teach you something about yourself. I want you to see your parents." Gabriel continued.

"My parents? They have been dead a long time, longer than I can remember them. I don't understand what you mean." Jon said cynically.

"Jon, I don't think you understand who I really am." Gabriel in a one hand motion removed his white cloak to reveal such a brightness that the entire cave was burning with white heat. "It is now time to show my true self."

Jon became blinded as if hit by a flashbang grenade in the glory of Gabriel's radiance. He fell to his knees in anguish suddenly overcome with intense fear. "Master," he proclaimed in reverence.

"While Jensen saw to it that he developed Otaku we have been overseeing the real you." Gabriel explained. Heaven's Cry was cradled in his side with a golden scabbard becoming even more magnificent due to Gabriel's glow. "You may remember being told that you were either left with Jensen or were rescued by Jensen. I tell you the truth that you were in fact stolen."

Jon couldn't see anything but at the sound of those words tried to find the voice making such a claim.

"Your parents were guardians of the sacred fire who through no fault of their own bore a child of light and darkness. You were to be heir to my inheritance and sit at my feet. Instead your darkness was engendered by Jensen- who you defeated. Did you not hear her voicce when you were in your battle with him, did your spirit not burn within you." Gabriel proclaimed.

"Mother..." Jon said in awe. He was blinded but he saw more now than ever before. All these years he had believed a lie.

"My child, hearken to the words of your parents," Gabriel shouted. He began to form the sacred seals. Voices could faintly be heard from deeper in the cave.

"Jon, my son. Jonny my dear dear child," said the voice.

Jon opened his eyes wide and he was suddenly able to see. He saw Gabriel standing solemnly and heard the voices coming from deep in the cave. "M-m-mm-mother?" Jon stuttered. He heard the all too familiar voice of his earliest memory, and the voice that lead him to the leadership of the clan.

"You can go and speak with them. You will not be able to see them, for they are not here. Take your time and learn from them. Your final test awaits you here when you must do battle with me. Go!" Gabriel commanded.

Jon obeyed meekly and left in the direction of his parents voices. He couldn't understand why he would have to fight Gabriel or even what was happening. He felt so overwhelmed he couldn't even think clearly. "Mommy, Daddy, I am here, it is me, your son," Jon cried out in the save where the voices were. Tears streamed down his face. He finally began to understand the significance of the Path of Empathy.
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Old 02-27-2006, 11:29 AM
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Jon began walking aimlessly down the cave, stumbling on every sharp and dislodged stone in the ground. He had the look of a young boy running towards his mothers arms, sheer bliss on his face. He stopped at the right place because he could feel the air become humid like his parents arms wrapped around him.

"Mother....Father, its been so long, i wanted to see you both, oh mother" Jon began to choke with tears of joy. His mother began to sing a celestial song that carressed Jons very insides.
"We are proud of the man you grew up to become son" said his dad.
"But you cant become any better unless you know where you came from" Jons mom began after she finished her song.
"We dont have to do that now, we can talk about so much other-"
"No Jon, we dont have time. You have to know this first." interrupted Jons mom.
"Yes mother, you are right, please tell me, what am i? what really happened with me?" asked Jon. Just then a lazy wind began to blow, and it slowly started to accelerate and it seemed to take the scenery with it. the mountain turned into a valley and darkness turned into pale moonlight and open air. Jon found himself looking at a strange scene. He saw horses grazing in the field and people with bandages in tents and doctors attending each one using strange techniques. The fog of war was scattered all over. This was a battle field. Jons mom began,
"This time was the age of the clan wars, two decades before you were born. These people are the Denravi clan, our homeland, yes, yours too son. We were once a quiet clan who lived secluded from other clans and we practiced our techniques in silence. But what people do not understand, they fear. Because we were seculded, other clans feared our powers were increasing. We experimented in corpses and body parts and how to manipulate human souls, necromancy if you will. Over time we grew better and better at this art till we were able to use these techniques without much thought. But this gave rise to a great evil."

Jon watched as those in bandages seemed to get up again without ailment and continue on their work. After a while the tents were pulled down and it was time for the warriors to gather the dead. He saw two men go across to a corpse in the dust. one man began to reassemble his body with a technique, he could only tell by a yellow glow, the other man began forming seals and whispering for a long time and finally a blue glow came out from him and into the corpse. The man cam back to life! he was finally able to pull his eyes from what was going on but then he instantly turned them back for he saw something else intriguing.

A giant man came out from on of the big tents in the valley. he had two great arms with iron knuckles on them. "Cheiftain Tauren sir, the recovery of the injured is complete, we are now attending to the downed." The Cheiftain nodded then said, "The Hunagi clan will soon regroup, we need all the warriors we can get. prepare yourselves for the trap. with our forces we cant wish to defeat them without trickery"

As the scene continued, Jons father began, "That was Cheiftain Tauren, yes, he is the one whos technique you use so often. After our clans enslavement he was banished to another dimension, i figure it was there he changed his figure and former glory. Jon, look some more at the great sin that overcame our clan." Jon looked and saw a huge battle ensuing, with Tauren at the center of it all. his fists severing soul from body by the tens, each hand, covered in blood from his enemies. After what seemed days of none-stop fighting the Denravi clan surrendered. Tauren was taken away in thick chains and the people were led into the Hunagi village. In the night there was a great celebration of the Hunagi clan's victory. All the captives were led into the center around the fire while the Hunagi clansmen geered and laughed. Then chaos struck. The men and women of the Denravi clan fell to the floor and began to writhe in pain. The Hunagi laughed the more. The men and women began to mutate. Their skins turned full black and their hairs white, their bodies grew and grew in statue and great thick powerful wings grew from their backs. Fangs and claws began to grow from their hands, feet and teeth. They all resembled... Otaku! With a wild frenzy they began to rip off heads and tear out hearts, mangle flesh and amputate body parts. The more blood that gushed the less these fiends were appeased. after a few minutes, all that remained were the children of the Denravi clan and the fiends. They had slaughtered, man, woman and child. They turned to rescue their Cheif but he was already gone. With very little self contol remaining they turned to their own children.

Out of nowhere a great white light came flooding in like a beam. it touched one of the fiends and his particles were scattered instantly, no blood or bones remaining. Jon switched his head to view a brilliant looking gentlemen wearing untarnished full white in a bloody valley. He saw a sword with a golden scabbard resting snugly by his waist. Gabriel! With swift movements he spread his etherel wings and took off into the air, slowly withdrawing his sword. It cried and screamed with joy as if it was being used for the first time in eons. The fiends took off for Gabriel but Garbiel did not look worried. he pointed his sword at the enemy and stopped dead in mid air. a white aura came over the sword and a white beam shot off towards the fiends. as it over took them, they became harder to see as the glow intensified. The children on the ground covered their eyes for fear of the light. when they re-opened them, there was nothing....

"We were only ten years old then, hardly able to fight. All our parents died because they used the forbidden techniques, the limit of our clans ability. For ten more years us children carried on as the Denravi clan, conducting our experiments and becomming better at what we do. We were the first to get married from our clan and Gabriel returned saying he wanted our first child to grow into a good person by his side. When you were born, you know the rest, if Gabriel says it, its true. We thought Jensen was the one to collect you on Gabriels behalf." Jons mother paused.

"Because of the Denravi clan's blood in you, you have immense power and also the grave curse. Succeed our clan, you will be the first to free yourself and your kin from the curse. We have but one favour. Find the clan, unite with your family and do your work as Gabriels heir. We love you son and when this is all done we will see you soon, we can talk for as long as you want there. We must go now. be strong and find all the power that the Denravi blood has in you. Farewell..." Jons father finished and the humidity around Jon faded, the breeze blewin the opposite direction and the mountain came back, the darkness enveloped and the cold earth returned.

Jon turned around and walked back slowly towards Gabriel. He called on Hellscream and it returned to its scabbard by his side. He stopped in front of Gabriel and looked up, resolve etched in his features. "LETS END THIS!"
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Feeling the determination emanating it self from him like the rays of the sun, Gabriel could feel his pure determination, his unfailing urge to go forward. Without saying a word Gabriel motioned him over to a long narrow passageway in the side off the mountain that seemed to have appeared from nowhere. From it came countless beams of light reaching out to them as the stared down what seemed to be an endless path. On the doorway were symbols of an old language. Gabriel waved his hand across the words and they changed, “Where the light and the dark separate”.

“Towards the beginning,” Gabriel began, “There was a eternal battle that took place, a battle between the darkness and the light. They say that this is what resulted in the night and the day and from this chaos the world came into being. The light brought forth life and hope and the darkness brought death and despair. The battle is one that rages on eternally, though no longer out side it continues within every heart. Within us all I the capability for good and evil.”

Shadows now seemed to appear, pushing the light aside. The light and the shadows now began pushing at each other in what resulted in both swirling around like a small whirlpool of light and dark.

“There was a people long ago that did something much the same like yours. They viewed the darkness within them as just another power they could awaken and manipulate. However they were wrong and much like your clan they ended up with a similar curse. They however were able to find a remedy for this curse, but it was one were everything was risked. Step through that doorway and you shall feel the darkness begin to part with your body. You will not be able to use the souls that you have obtained, you will have only to rely on your own strength. As to what will happen in there I cannot say but when it is over, only one of you should be able to come back out.” Gabriel looked across at Jon who’s face remained the same. Pure determination etched into it. “You cannot carry that with you.” He motioned towards Hellscream. “You must enter pure of heart and mind les the darkness swallow you up before you reach the inter cambers. Now go and do not forget why it is you must do this, and don’t allow for the darkness to swallow you up. For if it does, then it shall be the end.”

Eyes fixed on the pathway before him Jon pulled his blade from its holding and tuck it into the ground next to him. Then like a man memorized by a great beauty his legs moved, pulling him toward that path. His mind filled with new found memorises of his parents, of his clan, of his love. He continued forward to the whirlpool of light and dark. Standing before it he stretched forth a hand into it. The lights and shadows danced dynamically on his skin as their battle raged on. Soon the darkness began to retreat from where Jon’s hand had entered like a hand recoiling from a flame that burned it. As he stepped through the light the darkness moved further away from him. Gabriel closed his eyes and nodded solemnly to himself.

“Yes you are indeed ready.” He said to himself.

On the other side of the swirling light and darkness Jon stared down the long narrow passage illuminated by a light that seems to beam froth from every inch of the path before him. With clenched fist he gritted his teeth and took a step forward. As his foot came in contact with the ground his mind and consciousness shook as a sudden memory flashed back to him and the face of one he had killed flashed before his mind’s eyes. He suddenly felt weaker as he looked around but the memory was gone. Taking another step like before there was another memory, he hand just used Cheiftain to destroy that entire area, the cries of innocent lives echoed in his mind like a cruel torment. The faces of those cries danced around in his mind as he felt the brink of insanity creep up on him. When the memories vanished at last he was covered in sweat dripping from him as though he had just been doused in cold water. He felt weak, he fell to one knee his hand shakily clutching the ground as he now tired to crawl forward, another memory of some wrong he had done flashed before him once more with each progression forward was the memory of a wrong doing and the face of some who he had caused pain as he felt as though he experienced the pain he caused. His breath now becoming short gasps he forced himself to his feet. He was getting nowhere like this, he thought to himself, he had to push himself further. His breath now trembling he looked forward towards the end of the long passage. This was the final stretch and he had to make it across. With shaky fist clutched once more he made a dash forward, memories flooded each step, pain accompanying everyone. He was almost there, his foot hit the ground another memory, and another face more pain. He reached the end now he could see the light at the before him in the archway dancing as though reflecting through water, he was there now and he through himself through it. He hit the ground as the last memory faded away, he tired to force himself to his feet when with a sudden burst like a starving flame being feed oxygen the was an uproar of screams as he felt the souls within him start to be drawn out. He could feel their pain as each one was pulled away from him. As the last few left he could hear the voice of his mother and father.
“We love you son.”
“Please remember what you have been taught.”

Lifting his head from the ground he felt as though he had just awoken from an unconscious sleep. Blurry eyes gazed around him as he could see that he was in a circular room. He blinked away the blurriness that blocked his vision as before him he saw a pedestal. He still felt weak, but he pushed himself up and looked at the pedestal before him. Above it hovering a mere few inches was what looked like a crystal ball. Staggering forward he used the pedestal to hold himself upright as he almost fell forward. He looked into it and saw the same swirling light from before, but it began to take shape. It formed what he had known to be the ying yang sign. A swirl of darkness against a swirl of light, each possessing a small piece of the other within them. He reached forward his hand and rested him palm on the ball. There was a blinding flash as he fell back to the ground, he raised his head to look across the ground and on the opposite side through eyes once again blurred he could see a dark figure lying on the ground. Was it him? Could it be?
His questions could not be answered now as he slowing slipped into the world of his mind, his consciousness faded away from him.
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As Jon's eyes began to come into focus he stared upward at a dark figure before him. It was the same figure he had seen next to him when he was unconscious. The figure had dark skins made of scales and there seemed to be a protrusion on his back. Becoming terrified at the prospect Jon began to crawl backwards.

"So Jon, you want to exorcise me... you really think you are strong enough without me?" the dark figure asked.
"Otaku! What the.." Jon stuttered.
"So you touch the symbol of the separation of good and evil and you didn't expect us to separate?" Otaku questioned.
Jon stood and looked around. The crystal ball was still in tact- he was in the real world and really seeing Otaku in person. "I will end this now!!" Jon rushed after Otaku.
As Jon lunged forward he aimed his fist for Otaku's face. He narrowly missed as Otaku backed away. He struck again, this time trying to hit where his ribs should be. Thud! This time the hit connected.
"All these years of fighting by my side and this is what you think? You ungrateful bastard." Otaku screamed. Otaku held Jon's sides as his dragon-like wings rose from his back. "You..." Otaku's left wing smacks Jon's face left. "Are..." Otaku's right wing slashes at Jon's cheek. "Strong enough!" Otaku let go of Jon and punched him repeatedly in his stomach.
Jon bent over in pain and clutched his stomach. He knew that as he was, without any souls both he and Otaku were at their weakest- yet he couldn't do anything. Otaku walked over to Jon and kicked him backwards in his face.
"I will deal with you later. Rest now" said Otaku. He placed his hand on Jon's forehead. Jon became unconscious again and seemed to fade away. The crystal ball became totally black. Otaku smirked and began to make his way back through the path Jon had taken.
As Otaku progressed the souls that had left began to return. Instead of having the pain of those he tortured he was made even stronger. Otaku's skin began to grow thicker and his wings became wider- he was having trouble closing it on his back.

As Otaku's shadow emerged Gabriel looked up. He knew something was wrong. Otaku stood at the door and stared at Gabriel. The swirl of dark and light was now only dark. Otaku now had a deadly aura of blackness swirling around him.
Otaku pulled his sheath out of his waist and held out his right hand. "HellScream!!" he commanded. Hellscream rose out of the ground and flew to its master's hand.
"Gabriel- I am going to kill you now," Otaku began.
"Let us find a more appropriate battleground," Gabriel suggested.
Otaku blinked and he appeared in a field that seemed to be surrounded with bamboo trees. Gabriel appeared seconds later.
Otaku sheathed Hellscream and placed the scabbard in his waist. His wings could no longer be contained as they spread out. Otaku became a fearsome sight. Dark energy began to swirl around him. The battlefield was divided sharply by the darkness and the light- Otaku's side was pure night while Gabriel's side was clear day.
"You tried to exterminate my kind old man. I have finally discovered the purpose of meeting you- I am here as fate's messenger of vengance!" Otaku shouted.

"Lets begin." Gabriel began to perform a special sealing ritual. Heaven's Cry began to glow in his scabbard. "There will be no more forgiveness!"
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Otaku tightens his grip on Hellscream, he begins to notice a familar sound resonating in his ears becoming ever more apparent.

He could feel hellscream's evil aura growing stronger, reacting to the pure divinty of Gabriel's weapon, Heavens cry.

Gabriel unsheathed his divine blade, the sound of purity sliding against his runed scabbard echoed throughout, Otaku unsheathed Hellscream, It flew out of its sheath as if by its own will, Otaku could barely manage a proper grasp on his enraged weapon of evil.

"this...this feeling, this awesome power, where did it come from?, no mattter, i will embrace this feeling of raw evil and become one with Hellscream." shouts Otaku.

Otaku grasps hellscream with all of his might.

"Kneel to my will Hellscream!!!!.................." screams otaku.
A short second passes, Otaku regains composure.

"And you shall....", otaku's voice deepens and echoes as if it has become two, his eyes become blackend with darkness..."KNOW INFINTE DESPAIR!!!"

"let us begin", speaks Gabriel, his ethereal wings purtrude forth from his back.

They motion forward, but there movement is only percieved for a second...
the once distinct separate border between the light and dark begin to swirl and deform then they are pulled into separate locations as if two different colours of water swirling into a drain, then the point of swirling swiftly began to move and collied ferociously against each other, Otaku and Gabriel reappear with swords fiercly hitched against each other, there swords becoming white hot from the intense opposing forces.

They break away, Otaku grinds his hand against hellscream revealing but a drop of his fiery blood and in a full body spinning motion thursts hellscream into the ground, the ground instantly becomes engulfed in blackness and shoots upwards, Gabriel jumps upwards and outsretches his palm downwards and heavens cry pointed to the sky, the blackness touches his palm and he holds it at bay and with one swooping motion, heavens cry plays its sweet song as it penetrates the darkness, a white light is sent out in the full motion of the swing, cuts through the darkness and levels the earth below, Otaku jumps up at a speed unknown to human eyes, Gabriel motions his sword directly behind him in a diagonal position, Hellscreams collides, He motions to the right, Otaku and hellscream collide again, he motions to his front, otaku's attack is blocked again.

Otaku breaks off and smiles to himself, " IS THIS THE BEST YOU HAVE TO OFFER HOHENHEIM OF LIGHT? HA, YOUR DEATH WILL BE EMINENT!"

a black hole begins to form behind Otaku's outstretched wings, the air begins to be sucked in.
"YOU KNOW WHAT THIS IS DONT YOU? HAHAHAHA, TREMBLE BEFORE ME!", screams Otaku.
"your summons are no match for me, do yourself a favor and rely on your own skills and how can you summon it without Jon", speaks Gabriel.

"OH DONT WORRY, I WILL, AND JON WASNT COMPLETELY USELESS, HE AND I ARE BASICALLY THE SAME PERSON, IT WASNT THAT DIFFICULT" speaks Otaku.

Chieftain steps forth from the vortex, and rushes after Gabriel, Gabriel sees this as an oppurtunity to kill Otaku but to Gabriel's surpise he finds Otaku charging from behind he quickly turns around to cut off Otakus attack and then kicks off of chieftains apporaching fist.
Gabriel gently lands on the other side of what is left of the bamboo forest.

"so....you can now fight with cheiftain, interesting." speaks Gabriel....
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Otaku lands gently on the right side of Gabriel, his wings flapping wildly to calm his descent. Chieftain lands on Gabriel's left. Garbiel looks on either side of him and he realises he is trapped in the middle. But to Otaku's surprise.... he laughs. He doesnt stop laughing, as if he is taunting Otaku, he throws his head back by now and lets out a loud laughter into the cloudless sky.

By this time Otaku is clearly downright livid and curious. "Why is he laughing at me? does he have a trick up his sleeve? what the-" Okaku cuts himself short as he sees Gabriel sheath his blade then says, "I give Jon more credit, you are just a spoilt brat wanting to play with new toys. You are not ready to defeat me, till you are i will not draw my blade to you."

"ENOUGH, AAAARRRRGGGHHHH" Otaku charges in sword first and instantly Cheiftain, as if he read Otakus movements perfectly, charged in as well. They approached at high speed knocking bamboo shoots aside and smashing rocks and obstacles in their way. Gabriel slides both feet in opposite directions and braces himself, he throws out both hands in the directions Otaku and Cheiftain are coming from and pushes what seems like the very fragments of the atmosphere outwards. The ripples on either side creates a domino effect which slams into both Otaku and Cheiftain, knocking them back forcefully in an instant. Gabriel spins around and tries to brace but in vain as Cheiftains knuckles clash heavily against the mental barrier he managed to conjure in the nick of time. "Cheiftain was teleported right behind me by Otaku, what power!" Garbiel says to himself as he is knocked over the edge of the bambo forest and he falls down into the valley below. He lands without incident onto the ground in a dustfilled clearing. He looks forward and sees Otaku charging after him with his sword and without enough time to push him back he is forced to fly backwards, away from Otaku. As he flies backwards and Otaku flies forward their bodies are locked in a movement never touching each other. Otaku lunges foward with all his might and plunges his sword towards Gabriel, Gabriel can do nothing but watch as the sword closes in on him and just as it was about to gouge his eye, he hears the laughter of Otaku as he vanishes. "No the barrier!! Cheiftain, where is he? behind?" Gabriel lands on the ground as if not to spare even a milli-second and tries to conjure a powerful barrier, but without enough time. Cheiftain plunges down from the heavens and lands with both feet on Gabriels barrier.

Gabriel begins to shake from the weight of cheiftain. He tries his best to reject Cheiftain but his barrier begins crumble in like paper. Cheiftain stretches out to his full extent in the air, puts his fists together and comes down brutally on what is remaning of Garbiels barrier. One hammer from cheiftain: the ground beneath Gabriel begins to sink. Gabriel realises he is in dire straights as his makeshift barrier is weakening with no sign of Otaku. Cheiftain recoils again as he comes down like a spring on the barrier for his second attack......

"NNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOO" Cheiftain booms as a stream of white flows from the barrier up the middle of his body past his chest and exits the top of his head. A cloud of white floats up and takes cheiftain, throwing him off the barrier up onto the bamboo forest above. When the clouds decipate Gabriel stands tall with his sword glowing white in the air, feasting on the glory of the sun.

"I caused you to draw your blade, old man" said Otaku, landing in front of Gabriel some yards away. He vanishes and appears beside Cheiftain in the clearing, what used to be a bamboo forest. "Become one with my blade, give me your evil and hate just as Jensen did, DEPLORE" a wave of blue aura begins to stream from Cheiftain into Hellscream, Cheiftains very existence begins to be sucked into the sword, his body and his soul. The blue wave covers the whole area as if to shield Gabriel from seeing what was taking place.

******* Blue smoke spreads over the entire area *********

Something pierces the smoke and charges after Gabriel. Gabriel flies up and the thing misses its target but spins around and tries again. Gabriel dodges again and gets a better look. He saw two chains moving with the agility of snakes charging after him, ends open trying to trap him. "Its no use playing with the dolls when i can get the source" Gabriel says to himself as he flies towards the smoke, where the chains came from. Otakus wings begin to protrude from the smoke and he begins to flap wildly, creating a gust that blows back Gabriel and removes the smoke from the battlefield. Hellscream stood lodged in the ground with chains sticking out of the bottom of the grip like medusas hairs. The sword had now transformed a second time. It was broad and sturdy, with runes all the way down to the tip. from all obervations it had not changed except for the chains and a peculiar thing. It had two other blades on either side of the main blade. They didnt meet the main blade on length but they were a bit shorter and they curved gently down towards the guard where they met.

He took the blade out of the ground and pointed it at Gabriel. The tip trembled and two red balls of light began to glow on top of the new blades. The lights connected by a beam and then shot towards a newly formed red glow on the tip. The beams consolidated and then the whole sword burst into a red glow. "TASTE DEATH BASTARD STOMP THEM, HELLSCREAM" The blast fired off and soared at top speed towards Gabriel, who effortlessly evaded. The blast landed behind Gabriel and caused catastrphic damage to the surroundings. in its pasisng was left a huge welt in the soil. Otaku began to laugh as he fired off blast after blast in quick succession by simply turning and releasing the blast. The chains on the grip spang alive again and began to chase after Gabriel, 4 or 5 chains chasing Gabriel at top speed while he tried to evade the blasts from Otaku.

Gabriel now realised this was Otaku's perfect form. Hellscream was finally complete and so was Otaku's power. He had to do something, and fast. It was time for him to stop holding back

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The chains from hellscream once again pounced at Gabriel who backflipped away from their attacks. With each strike the chains seem to be getting closer and closer to Gabriel who was goin backwards away from them. At the last second another blast was fired, this time it came in a ball going directly at Gabriel's chest. As Gabriel came out of his maneuvers he saw that the ball was less than 5 feet away and coming in at a blinding speed.

With a flick of his sword the attack dissipated, Gabriel took a single deep breath at which he seemed to calm down so much you would never believe he was fighting one of the most powerful beings alive. As quickly as Gabriel calmed himself he was suddenly charged with a power that seemed to be rising every second. As his power continued to rise his wings flapped rappidly, feathers falling off as they moved quicker, they looked rather magnificent compared to the scaly wings of Otaku.

Gabriel dashed straight forward at Otaku, who once again fired a blast from hellscream. Easily dodging it Gabriel continued his forward strike, when he approached where Otaku was he made a strike... But sliced through nothing but air. Otaku appeared above him preparing for a direct downward stab with hellscream but before he could finish his attack, with a flap of his wings Gabriel moved away.

"I see your speed has managed to keep up with your power" Gabriel said
"You fool, i have the souls of many great warriors in me, each with unique abilities, luckily for me speed is one of them" Otaku said as he disappeared and reappeared behind Gabriel and made a quick slice, but only managing to get a few feathers.

Gabriel stood a good distance away and gripping heaven's cry tightly he said "White Phoenix's Tail feather", once again heaven's cry's glow became so bright it was almost blinding, the gold handle shining brilliantly against the white.

Gabriel disappeared, there was a clashing of swords and Gabriel reappeared again behind where Otaku stood. Then Otaku disappeared, appearing just in time to allow his chains to strike Gabriel who then stopped and quickly parried the attack by Otaku, and countered with a swift kick to the ribs, but Otaku teleported behind Gabriel and swung his large fist at Gabriel's head but he also teleported away.

"There is a difference in our attacks you know old man" Otaku said
"Whereas your technique boosts your speed to a level at which you seem to be teleporting..." Otaku disappeared and in less than a second appeared above Gabriel "Mine actually makes me teleport." Otaku came down with a powerful attack which was easily sidestepped by Gabriel sliced straight through one of Otaku's wings taking it clean off.

Otaku fell on the ground groaning in pain
"I'm Going to kill you old man!!!" he screamed as he got up and took up hellscream, charging it up to release what seemed to be a more powerful blast
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Gabriel prepared to block what he thought would be another blast but was caught off guard as Otaku painted his face with a menacing grin.
“Say good bye to this plain of existence old man.” He said and within that statement he dug his sword into the ground before him and at the top of his voice yelled. “Dark aura!” The entire area grew to nothing but darkness, the only visible lights where the bright white aura that hugged itself around Gabriel and Otaku’s now glowing red eyes. “Tower of flame!” Otaku finished.
Gabriel felt the entire area tremble with immense power as he looked below him and saw the entire ground blaze to life with an evil crimson flame. Then before he could move a tower of flame rose up completely surrounding him as it raced towards the skies. Gabriel tried to race the flames but it proved fruitless as it closed up at the top. He raised his sword as he intended to blow a path through the wall of fire when he heard Otaku’s voice echoing from everywhere and nowhere.
“I wouldn’t do that if I were you old man.” His voice filled with an dark ominous tone. “You should save your energy.”
Gabriel now understood what he meant as he felt the air being drawn out from the centre where he was. What was more he could feel the flames feeding on his power.
Outside Otaku hovered in the air right next to the burning tower. He’d re-grown his wing thanks to the power of another soul and now it was time to use it. Drawing Hellscream into position he flew directly into the flames.
Gabriel closed his eyes focusing on Otaku’s movements outside the tower. He could sense him coming. He held his sword behind him and parried Otaku’s attack as Otaku continued to fly back out through the flames. Again Otaku darted into the flames and Gabriel once more blocked the attack but barely this time. Otaku smirked evilly as he knew Gabriel weakened with every growing second.
“Yes you shall be mine!” Otaku’s voice echoed again.
However this time as Gabriel parried the attack he reached out and grabbed Otaku’s neck. Otaku’s eyes widened with surprise as Gabriel drew back his blade and released and blue blast from the tip of it into his chest. The blast sent Otaku flying back out of the tower. Gabriel however didn’t release his grip on his neck and flew along with him out of the tower as Otaku’s body parted the flames, Gabriel received few burns. Once outside Gabriel released Otaku and allowed him to fall to the ground once more. The flames slowly faded away as Otaku’s impact shook the ground.
Hovering in the air Gabriel looked down at his adversary as he staggered back to his feet. Without a word Gabriel pointed his sword to towards the sky and the light returned once more and the clouds which were blocked by the darkness up until now made their presence felt. Light began to illuminate everything, even Otaku shielded his eyes from the sudden burst of light.
“Come forth Phoenix Sol.” Gabriel said calmly.
The cloud parted and a small ball of white light descended slowly from above shining brightly like a precious jewel. It came down until in was a mere few inches above Gabriel. With a frightening loud boom and a light more blinding than anything in existence the ball exploded into a huge bird, a phoenix. Otaku shielded the light as Gabriel’s figure became a silhouetted then faded away lost in the everlasting light. The giant white bird that had appeared from the small ball of light pointed its magnificent ivory like beak to the sky as blue light that danced like flames awoke around its figure. Its long tail feathers gently swept the ground beneath as it flapped it wings gently and echoed it soothing melodious call. Otaku took a firm grip of his sword as he watched the creature hover in majestic grace above him.
However slowly it began to fade away as Gabriel’s figure once again came back into view. The bird however seemed to be turning to pure energy which flowed into Gabriel’s outstretched sword. Soon the blinding light that came from everywhere emanated only from Gabriel’s blade.
Otaku gritted his teeth as the point of Gabriel’s blade lined itself up with him.
“I’m afraid this I where our battle must come to an end.” Gabriel’s voice spoke a sense of completion in Otaku’s soul. “Clutch your blade for the last time and move towards your end.” The white light blazed as though it were flame around his form as a blue light did the same on the edges of the white light.
“Don’t be so quick to ay such thing old man!” Otaku raged as his grip tightened around his blade.
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